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Posted by RonInBayside on Fri Aug 24 14:51:12 2007, in response to new school prayer, posted by monorail on Fri Aug 24 07:19:06 2007. Great poem, EXCEPT for one fatal flaw, but you can fix it:Wherever you write "Our," substitute "my." Then add "my" missing from a few places. As in "It's "inappropriate" to teach my right from wrong," |